corncamper's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[_-=+princess Dannae+=-_]

4/5, 8/10

Sounds like you're more then friends ^^.

Joke aside, you need to do some minor adjustement to the melody in the beginning. There is a few "Out of key" tones. Amazing buildup and fantastic choice of synths.

Really, i can hardly point anything bad out. Except that it's somehow a bit boring/repitative at times.

Great job on this one!

DjCHAOS-EZPOT responds:

Uhg i know. It took me forever just to get the tones as good as i could. thnax tho!

[-Neckbeards-]

2/5, 4/10

The beginning DID kill my ears, the rest of the loop did too, im afraid.

Sorry man, it's just really uninteresting to listen to, no offence.

[FullTrance-Woot (Full)]

3/5, 7/10

Your melody is godly, however i don't like neither the buildup, nor the synths used. That really high sound (I don't know what intrument it is, some kind of bell i guess) is terribly annoying.

Around 2:00, you add an awesome synth. Probably the one i missed early. Really af shame it weren't added earlier.

Good job.

[Synth remind me (Instrumental)]

3/5, 6/10

Sorry dude, but the melody is awful. It's really boring and dang repitative. I like the percussion used though, the clap/snare you use suits it good. The buildup is also great.

Oh well, alright job.

TEMPHUiBIS responds:

Hi there I want to apologise for This LONG delayed response, I didn't use this site properly as much as I'm gonna start now, I wanna respond to everyone who commented. Thanks for ya truthful criticism, I can obviously admit this isn't my best work. I'm glad you liked the percussion, I'm sorry the melody ruined it for ya, The reason why the melody repeated was because I initially had vocals on this track, with verses and a chorus. Although I took out the vocals, the song was still structured to be like a verse, chorus, verse, bridge (you get the point lol) but of course, I didn't do quite a good job with the melody and once again, sorry that ruined it for ya. Thanks again for your criticism from 6 years ago lol and thanks for even giving this a listen, I have some more tracks that I made in 2009 that I'm uploading soon, if you manage to listen to them, I hope you'll enjoy them more.

[Getting Effective]

4/5, 7/10

Wow, that's really great. Awesome melody. Needs better synth's though.

I would replace that zelda style sound. Also i don't really like the percussion.

Buildup is amazing, melody is amazing, the vocal in the beginning is amazing XD!

TEMPHUiBIS responds:

Hi there I want to apologise for This LONG delayed response, I didn't use this site properly as much as I'm gonna start now, I wanna respond to everyone who commented. Thanks for ya truthful criticism, I'm sorry the synths wasn't ya taste, I'm very glad you love the rest :)

I'm planning a come back and I'm hoping I can improve my synths style and other flaws. Thanks again for ya criticism, thanks for even listening (6 years ago) lol

[-*Chaoz Fantasy (M.K. Remix)*-]

3/5, 7/10

Hmm ... Not so original im afraid. It really kills it that you let out the small part of the melody. Also, you don't ever make it steady, which is one of the most amazing things about Chaoz Fantasy: It is so steady, yet so interesting to listen to.

Oh well, good job anyways.

[Happiness and Joy]

4/5, 8/10

You are so mad >=]

Lol, entertaining to listen to XD

Hellstick responds:

Admit it... You LOVE it:D

[~EnV~Chaoz Fantasy RMX]

Haha XD

I smell nexus! Awesome ^^

Envy responds:

o.o

[Swift (Full Version)]

4/5, 9/10

Lol, cool 8-]

ragingmullet responds:

8-] Thanks!

[To Be Continued]

4/5, 7/10

I don't like the singing, sorry .. I like the guitarplay.