corncamper's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Go West (Scratch RMX)]

4/5, 9/10

Wrooaa dude! That's really cool. You're really skilled, if you've done any of this. I figured that it's a remix, so i can't say for sure. Finally a guy who knows how to fade ^^

Sounds like a mixture of hundred songs.

Good job.

nal1200 responds:

Thanks

All of the synths have been made from scratch (hence the name) aside from the vocals with are of course the lyrics from the original version.

It's basically, if you can imagine, taking a building and reconstructing it entirely from new material.

[My Shawarma Queen (demo)]

5/5, 9/10

Did you make this? It's f... HILARIOUS!

Genius lyrics, fantastic guitarplaying. Your voice is alright, but matches the song perfectly.

Really good job!

shoester responds:

Haha thanks, man. I wrote this song more for fun than anything, but thanks again for the review!

[jigawhat]

3/5, 6/10

The lead synth is very harsh, and gets annoying before it is removed. And even more when it is readded.

That more "Bassy" sound is very nice to listen to, and the trumpet is also quite good.

Your song is not boring to listen to, but i would change at least half of the synths used. The beat get's really amazing when that lead synth is removed.

Alright, good job. Keep it up.

FFFCEM responds:

Yeah, I pretty much agree with you about the lead synth but its essential for the purpose of the song. thanks for the input. :)

[My Ideo of Hell III]

3/5, 7/10

This really feels like hell. Those stomps and demon yells are very well placed. It harms my ears though, so i doubt i will listen to this twice. Ending suck btw.

Great job, heh.

Oh yeah. The beginning reminded me of Halo 3.

Conal responds:

Kewl.

I've noticed that if you take a regular heavy drum & then stretch the wave you get this weirder beat effect.

["Life in the Machine" - NR]

3/5, 7/10

ARRRG!!!!! HARDSTYLE! DIIIEEE!!

Hehe, this would get a cool feeling to it if you made it more steady and changed the kick. It needs a soft break too, and maybe a melody XD.

Rating 7 because i like the vocals (DIIIIEEE!! Bla bla!!!).

Sonicist responds:

Thank you, I will tell Hardstyle to Die next time I see it =P

I guess it is a bit everywhere, still need to work on the actual songwriting stuff.

[_-=+princess Dannae+=-_]

4/5, 8/10

Sounds like you're more then friends ^^.

Joke aside, you need to do some minor adjustement to the melody in the beginning. There is a few "Out of key" tones. Amazing buildup and fantastic choice of synths.

Really, i can hardly point anything bad out. Except that it's somehow a bit boring/repitative at times.

Great job on this one!

DjCHAOS-EZPOT responds:

Uhg i know. It took me forever just to get the tones as good as i could. thnax tho!

[Synth remind me (Instrumental)]

3/5, 6/10

Sorry dude, but the melody is awful. It's really boring and dang repitative. I like the percussion used though, the clap/snare you use suits it good. The buildup is also great.

Oh well, alright job.

TEMPHUiBIS responds:

Hi there I want to apologise for This LONG delayed response, I didn't use this site properly as much as I'm gonna start now, I wanna respond to everyone who commented. Thanks for ya truthful criticism, I can obviously admit this isn't my best work. I'm glad you liked the percussion, I'm sorry the melody ruined it for ya, The reason why the melody repeated was because I initially had vocals on this track, with verses and a chorus. Although I took out the vocals, the song was still structured to be like a verse, chorus, verse, bridge (you get the point lol) but of course, I didn't do quite a good job with the melody and once again, sorry that ruined it for ya. Thanks again for your criticism from 6 years ago lol and thanks for even giving this a listen, I have some more tracks that I made in 2009 that I'm uploading soon, if you manage to listen to them, I hope you'll enjoy them more.

[Getting Effective]

4/5, 7/10

Wow, that's really great. Awesome melody. Needs better synth's though.

I would replace that zelda style sound. Also i don't really like the percussion.

Buildup is amazing, melody is amazing, the vocal in the beginning is amazing XD!

TEMPHUiBIS responds:

Hi there I want to apologise for This LONG delayed response, I didn't use this site properly as much as I'm gonna start now, I wanna respond to everyone who commented. Thanks for ya truthful criticism, I'm sorry the synths wasn't ya taste, I'm very glad you love the rest :)

I'm planning a come back and I'm hoping I can improve my synths style and other flaws. Thanks again for ya criticism, thanks for even listening (6 years ago) lol

[Happiness and Joy]

4/5, 8/10

You are so mad >=]

Lol, entertaining to listen to XD

Hellstick responds:

Admit it... You LOVE it:D

[~EnV~Chaoz Fantasy RMX]

Haha XD

I smell nexus! Awesome ^^

Envy responds:

o.o